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Fire burns my love away
Lust alone fills my empty soul.
Like silk your arm feels against mine,
a wink of the eye
sends my mind soaring ever-high.
I'm running,
my breath catches,
I'm filled with a hunger.
Chocolate eyes and raiments
of raven black,
a glint of a silver blade,
you strike,
spilling the blood,
and leaves me dead.
What good can lust be?
I wanted a car anyway.
©2008-2009 ~FstLtHawkeye
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Author's Comments

:iconthepiccoloplayer: issued us a challenge of writing something with all of the following words:

Fire, strike, love, lust, blade, raven, car, empty, soul, blood, arm, silk, hunger, breath, eye, running, mind, high, chocolate, wink.

I tag, and challenge, anyone that reads this to do it themselves. :3

Please, about my actual poem, leave comments and questions if you wish, but I'm awfully tired and just spent 3 hours getting pwned by my favorite ninja.

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:icondemonfox-of-eternity:
Bwahaha! ph34r teh Ninja!

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:iconvainya:
Interesting challenge; I'm always up for one though the words are used quite nicely here. Didn't even know there was a challenge.

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:iconthepiccoloplayer:
Great way of putting the words into a poem! :clap:
Sam, I luffles youz!

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<3<3<3

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It's weird. I love it.
:iconfstlthawkeye:
haha, thanks! and thanks for the fave! <3

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